CommentsA comment is a written note intended as an explanation, illustration, or criticism of a passage in a book or other writing; an annotation. also a statement of fact or opinion, especially a remark that expresses a personal reaction or attitude. With this you can see that you have to peer review before given a comment also analysis it and think about it first. Check if they have a good concept of the topic sentence. see if their vocabulary is on point, having no mistakes. Grammar and clarity
An example of commenting someones work: I believe that your position in the paper is not clear because you are trying to talk about different topics, which makes it hard to read and hard to summarize to says for sure what you were trying to do. In the first paragraph I read the part that says “Know i had trouble thinking, what is good writing” you are saying that you don’t know what you are writing about if you erase that part I think the essay would gain much more credibility.In the same paragraph you said: I came with the conclusion that “ It all depends on what type of writing you are doing” If you came with the conclusion, why the rest of the sentence is like if you copied it from somewhere else? In the body of the essay you talked about blogs, resumes and stories, but you limited to write about what are those and what they are for, there was no example or characteristics to make it easy to reader to know what they are or what makes a blog a good blog or what makes a story a good story by making examples of them. In the conclusion you said “There are a lot of ways you can write; that is still concider good writing” I feel that you are talking about some old kind of writing that some consider is not good anymore and some consider it good.Using Microsoft Word before public anything might help with some misspelling that the essay have.
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